Page one (scetch)

okay, i give full credit to I figured it would be cool if i just redrew her page and then color it in and all that kinds of stuff. She makes the actuall story becuase if there is anything im not good at, its making a decent story XD
anyway, this is just the scetch and i will make the finished product as soon as possible. Realy busy week. My uncle is dying of blood cancer, im failing science and doing poorly in American history so please understand if i cant finish these pictures fast enough.